英文作文(今昔反差)示範

何謂今昔反差?以下為例。

在小的時候，當我跌倒或是受到挫折之時，祖母都會扶著我起來。

When I fell down / suffer a lot / feel disappointed, my grandmother will pick me up / encourage me / inspire me

長大了，祖母已經過世了，當我跌倒師或是受到挫折之時，那雙曾經扶起我的雙手已經不在了。

As time goes by (隨著時間流逝)，my lovely grandmother passed away. When I fell down / suffer a lot / feel disappointed, the hand which / that helps me was disappeared / cannot accompany me / won’t be my side.

在我小的時候，那個市場是我快樂的來源，因為祖父母會帶我去買我喜歡吃的東西。

When I am still young, the market is the origin of the happiness. I can buy whatever I want owing to my grangfather’s concern or careness.

長大以後，舊地重遊了，一樣的攤販，一樣的叫賣聲，但我只能從口袋拿出零錢，買著記憶中熟悉的味道，身邊總覺得缺少了一個熟悉的溫度

When I become / grow / turn to be mature, I visit the same place which / that I am familiar with.

The same vendor and bargaining (討價還價)voice hover over (縈繞，這是我們背過的單字呦)my mind.

I pick the pocket miney (=allowance) from my pocket, and want to find / search for the familiar smell. However, my grandparents was not here! / I stand in the familiar place by meself.

有些字的確會有些難度，但是如果能運用我們會的單字，整篇文章或許會更有情感。另外，也可以先將中文的稿子寫下來，或許內容將會提升另一個檔次。

英文和中文都是一樣的，真誠才能感動人，其實也較好發揮!